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++Akatsuki Icesplendor++ by ~Icesplendor:iconIcesplendor:


©2005-2010 ~Icesplendor
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Oops, I made her left-handed. :0 It’s a drawing of my OC wearing an Akatsuki uniform from the anime Naruto.

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:iconkuroitsuki:
Hello! I just stumbled across your gallery randomly, so I'll try to offer you some helpful comments, maybe give you a few ideas. ^_^

Yes, simple is best. I think you did well with the eyes -- the color choice was a good one. I don't think you need the glow on the highlights, though. Highlights actually look shinier without a glow, because the contrast between the light and a dark background is higher that way. :nod:

Lineart is hard... For me, doing lines is really tedious and boring; coloring is the fun part. For this picture the even, simple lineart is nice, but maybe you can also try doing lineart in a more rough and scribbly style, overlapping strokes to make dark areas which contrast with the light areas. I personally find that technique a more fun and easy way to do lines, so maybe it would work for you. One still has to clean the mistakes up, though, otherwise it looks funny. ^^;

And maybe try being crazy with your colors. Use the color of an apricot to shade your skin. Use a deep murky burgundy in your shadows. Use 20 colors of gray. I commaaaand yooou... *mind control rays*

This is really nice and cute. Simplicity isn't easy, and you've achieved a nice simplicity here. Please keep submitting things for us to see! ... And tell your brother that drawing improves your spacial reasoning and perceptive abilities. Algebra helps you sometimes. A well-developed brain helps you all the time.

:hug:

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"But if I lift my eyes to at you gaze,
In my heart begins such a tremor
That my soul flees my beating pulses."
:iconicesplendor:
Thanks so much for the suggestions! ^__^ I really appreciate it, especially since I don't get too many comments on my pictures quite yet. xD ...and thanks for the reinforcement on my enduring battle with my brother! :glomp: :heart:

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I'm incompetent. OTL
:iconsasoriclub:
Aww this is soo cute! Love da cloak! ;)
:iconvickytheirontalon:
Cute!

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"I'm no physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
:iconnennisita1234:
AAwwww >w<

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:la:**~Himaruya will dominate the world~**:la:
:heart:tell me "Neny":meow:




:star::bulletred:HETAMERICA:bulletred: :star:
HETAMERICA is create by ~nennisita1234 -w-
:iconchaos-spawn:
lol she stole naruto's ramen!

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